Friday 21 May 2021

Descriptive Writing

Last week in T1 we were doing Descriptive writing on an image we got, we had to look at the image and describe how being there would feel like, this is mine.



I splashed in the icey blue water as I jumped off the boat, I walked up the beach on the sizzling sand and walked over to the hut I was staying at. As I walked in the sand from my feet covered the stained wood floor. I sat down and I heard the waves lapping onto the shore and palm trees blowing in the breeze. 

I go back out onto the hot sand and dive into the glistening light blue water, swimming past fish and sharp colorful coral, I come up for a breath as the beating hot sun shines down on me. 

I swim back to the shore and go and get coconut water. I take a sip on the refreshing drink, it runs down my throat, I couldn't think of anything better at the time. I look back out at the clear blue water and see seagulls flying around me. I take a long walk down the beach. 

The sand is now cold and I can no longer see the water. I look up and see thousands of tiny sparkling stars smiling down on me, they light up the sky as I turn around, walk back to the hut and go to bed.

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