Tuesday 10 March 2020

My memory poem

 this is my memory poem that i have been working on today and my theme was autumn because it is one of my favourite seasons enjoy

2 comments:

  1. Hi Bella

    Hope you are doing ok during this Level 4 lockdown? Hope you have some fun things happening at your house!

    This is a really beautiful poem that you have written about Autumn. I like the words that you have used to describe it and the colours that you have used with the falling leaves really is just lovely! Well done Bella, it is just great!

    Make sure you check out the Totara site for the work that you can do and some fun things to do at home too. I like the sound of the recipes there! I might try the biscuits at home!

    I look forward to reading some of your work over the next few weeks!

    Talk again soon!

    Mrs Costello :)

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  2. Kia ora, you have used language so expertly to describe how autumn feels. The format is eyecatching with a clear title and font plus an autumn coloured background and images of the falling leaves. Christchurch city is beautiful in autumn because most of the tress are deciduous and lose leaves.

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