Hope you are doing ok during this Level 4 lockdown? Hope you have some fun things happening at your house!
This is a really beautiful poem that you have written about Autumn. I like the words that you have used to describe it and the colours that you have used with the falling leaves really is just lovely! Well done Bella, it is just great!
Make sure you check out the Totara site for the work that you can do and some fun things to do at home too. I like the sound of the recipes there! I might try the biscuits at home!
I look forward to reading some of your work over the next few weeks!
Hey Bella, What a neat little poem. I love Autumn too. I think your choice of background and leaf images are very appropriate. You have managed to get soem good poetic language features into your poem such as... Rhyme (brown/town) Onomatopoeia (Crunch) Alliteration (breeze blowing) ...good on you!
Kia ora, you have used language so expertly to describe how autumn feels. The format is eyecatching with a clear title and font plus an autumn coloured background and images of the falling leaves. Christchurch city is beautiful in autumn because most of the tress are deciduous and lose leaves.
Hi Bella
ReplyDeleteHope you are doing ok during this Level 4 lockdown? Hope you have some fun things happening at your house!
This is a really beautiful poem that you have written about Autumn. I like the words that you have used to describe it and the colours that you have used with the falling leaves really is just lovely! Well done Bella, it is just great!
Make sure you check out the Totara site for the work that you can do and some fun things to do at home too. I like the sound of the recipes there! I might try the biscuits at home!
I look forward to reading some of your work over the next few weeks!
Talk again soon!
Mrs Costello :)
Hey Bella,
ReplyDeleteWhat a neat little poem. I love Autumn too. I think your choice of background and leaf images are very appropriate. You have managed to get soem good poetic language features into your poem such as...
Rhyme (brown/town)
Onomatopoeia (Crunch)
Alliteration (breeze blowing)
...good on you!
Do you enjoy reading and writing poems?
I am looking forward your next post,
See you soon,
Mrs Gully
Kia ora, you have used language so expertly to describe how autumn feels. The format is eyecatching with a clear title and font plus an autumn coloured background and images of the falling leaves. Christchurch city is beautiful in autumn because most of the tress are deciduous and lose leaves.
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