Kia ora Bella. My name is Hannah I am a year 6 in mamaku 2 at grey main school. I like the way you have added interesting facts about yourself. Next time I think that you could add more facts and add pictures.
Hi Bella its Lily here from Grey main school in Mamaku I really like your metaphors and how you made it really colourful.Next time you should make your words a bit bigger so we can read them clearly.
Kia ora Bella Briea here, I like the colourful background and how you presented it.Next time you should change the size of your writing and you should add some photos to it . From : Briea
Kia ora Bella.
ReplyDeleteMy name is Hannah I am a year 6 in mamaku 2 at grey main school. I like the way you have added interesting facts about yourself. Next time I think that you could add more facts and add pictures.
Hannah
Hi Bella its Lily here from Grey main school in Mamaku I really like your metaphors and how you made it really colourful.Next time you should make your words a bit bigger so we can read them clearly.
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ReplyDeleteBriea here, I like the colourful background and how you presented it.Next time you should change the size of your writing
and you should add some photos to it .
From : Briea
ok thank for the advise
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